Illusion short film( first draft)

The reason I have named this version my first draft is that their are elements of it that I am unhappy with . For instance , some shots have difficulty with sound , it is hard to hear what the characters say at times. Also , I want to edit the film further so it is shorter and more compact.The major issue I have encountered this year making a film is being able to decided the correct amount of footage to shoot. For example , I firstly recorded too little footage and then ended up recording too much , so I needed to narrow it down to the most important moments.