Magazine review page progress

 After receiving feedback , I noticed that my review page was lacking compared to my film poster. I decided to concentrate much more on this ancillary task than the other to make sure that it did not affect my overall grade. I discovered that my font size varied too much and needed to be more consistent throughout the article.The size was just too large to resemble other sophisticated magazines and the columns were also untidy.There were several spelling and punctuation errors which I soon ammended too.To improve further , I need to alter the image as it does not have much synergy with he film , is out of focus and is forgettable.